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2022-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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My special things are Disney character\'s products. I have a lot of dolls of Disney. There are things I bought and I got as a gift. I\'m just happy to see them. So my dolls are special things for me.

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Hi Ella! 
Yeah, I saw them and you have a lot! 
My special things are Disney character\'s products.
>>> My special things are Disney characters. 
I have a lot of dolls of Disney.
>>> I have a lot of Disney dolls.
There are things I bought and I got as a gift.
>>> There are items I bought and received as gifts.
I\'m just happy to see them.
>>> CORRECT!
So my dolls are special things for me.
>>> CORRECT!

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