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2012-02-24 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

학생이 쓴 원문

1) This is a nice cat. It's much nicer than my friend's cat. 2) Here is Emily. She's six years old. Her brother is nine, so he is 3 years older than his sister. 3) This is a difficult exercise. But the exercise with an asterisk (*) is the most easiest exercise on the worksheet. 4) He has an interesting hobby, but my sister has the most boring hobby in the world. 5) In the last holidays I read a good book, but father gave me an even more one last weekend. I was very busy yesterday in my work. I have to be ready for the next semester. I cleaned the library all the day. I did clean today, too. I vacuumed yesterday, today I pushed a clean stick. But this is not end. I have to wipe with a cloth on desk all in the library. I would be ill. Now, break time. I can't focus on my homework. I want to get off work.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name], Happy Friday! Thank you for making your homework once again..:) Job well done my dear so just keep up the good work.. I made some modifications on some of your sentences my dear Miss. [Name] so just try to read them. Talk to you later Miss. [Name].. Teacher Cam^^ 1) This is a nice cat. It\'s much nicer than my friend\'s cat. >>correct2) Here is Emily. She\'s six years old. Her brother is nine, so he is 3 years older than his sister. >> Here is Emily. She\'s six years old. Her brother is nine, so he is older than his sister. 3) This is a difficult exercise. But the exercise with an asterisk (*) is the most easiest exercise on the worksheet. >>This is a difficult exercise. But the exercise with an asterisk (*) is the most difficult exercise on the worksheet.4) He has an interesting hobby, but my sister has the most boring hobby in the world. >>He has an interesting hobby, but my sister has the most interesting hobby in the world. 5) In the last holidays I read a good book, but father gave me an even more one last weekend.>>In the last holidays I read a good book, but father gave me an even better one last weekend.I was very busy yesterday in my work. >>correctI have to be ready for the next semester. >>correctI cleaned the library all the day. >>I cleaned the library all day.I did clean today, too. >>I even cleaned today. >>I cleaned today, too.I vacuumed yesterday, today I pushed a clean stick. >>correctBut this is not end. >>But this is not yet the end.I have to wipe with a cloth on desk all in the library. >>I still have to wipe my desk in the library with a damp cloth.I would be ill. >>correctNow, break time. >>Now, is my break time.I can\'t focus on my homework. >>correctI want to get off work. >>I want to get off from work.  

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