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2022-03-10 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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If you were planning a party on a very small budget, what would you do to make it a great party? I will cook myself. Because If I do that, I can save money rather than having a food delivery. And also I will minimize something not essential.

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Hi [이름]!
 
That true because each penny counts. That sounds like a very intimate party. 

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I will cook myself. Because If I do that, I can save money rather than having a food delivery. 
>> I will cook myself because I can save more money with that than having food delivered. 

And also I will minimize something not essential.
>> Also, I want to minimize things that are not essential. 

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