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I totally agree that. When I was young, I wanted to have some brothers or sister.
But sometimes I feel grateful that I don\'t have any brother and I think a lot of the conflict has gone away because of it.
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Thank you for doing your homework! Regardless of the number of kids a family has, what matters most is they have a good relationship with each other.
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Aki~
I totally agree that. When I was young, I wanted to have some brothers or sister.
>>> I totally agree with that. When I was young, I also wanted to have siblings.
But sometimes I feel grateful that I don\'t have any brother and I think a lot of the conflict has gone away because of it.
But sometimes I feel grateful that I don\'t have any brother and I think a lot of the conflict has gone away because of it.
>>> I feel grateful that I didn\'t have any siblings thinking of the conflict that may occur and because of that my desire to have siblings has fade away.
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