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3/10
ESSAY QUESTION :
What are some bad things about smoking?
Are there any benefits of smoking?
ANSWER :
Bad thing about smoking is that aging comes fast and there is a risk of cancer.
Good thing about smoking is that it coping with stress helps you focus more on your work.
3/11
ESSAY QUESTION :
John Wooden said: \"Sports do not build character. They reveal it.\" Do you agree? Why or why not?
ANSWER :
I don\'t know understand meaning the question correctly.
I don\'t agree.
Each sports has a personality and different play style from person to person.
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Hello, Bob! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next week! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
Bad thing about smoking is that aging comes fast and there is a risk of cancer.
>>> The bad thing about smoking is that aging comes fast and there is a risk of cancer.
Good thing about smoking is that it coping with stress helps you focus more on your work.
>>> The good thing about smoking is that it copes with stress and helps you focus more on your work.
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I don\'t know understand meaning the question correctly.
>>> I don\'t understand the meaning of the question perfectly.
I don\'t agree.
>>> But I disagree with it.
Each sports has a personality and different play style from person to person.
>>> Each sport has a personality and different styles of playing for each person.
John Wooden said: \"Sports do not build character. They reveal it.\" Do you agree? Why or why not?
>>> Sports don\'t build or make a person\'s personality, it reveals who they really are when they become famous. Same as when they lose or win.
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