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I think we get our personality different when we grow up. We do not have our personality when we born but we make our personality then we born.
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~T.Erin
I think we get our personality different when we grow up.
>>I think we can discover our personality when we grow up.
We do not have our personality when we born but we make our personality then we born.
>>Our personality is not inborn, but we make our personalities/character while we\'re growing up.
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