Homework
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Among the things that I like best is my flute because I bought it for myself when I was poor.
Among the things that I do not like is a two door refrigerator because I still don\'t have enough money to buy the refrigerator I want.
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Among the things that I like best is my flute because I bought it for myself when I was poor.
>>> Correct!
Or >>> Among the things that I like best is my flute because I bought it for myself when I was struggling financially.
Among the things that I do not like is a two door refrigerator because I still don\'t have enough money to buy the refrigerator I want.
Among the things that I do not like is a two door refrigerator because I still don\'t have enough money to buy the refrigerator I want.
>>> Among the things that I do not like is our two door refrigerator because until now, I still don\'t have enough money to buy a new one.
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