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ESSAY QUESTION: What do you think of athletes making so much money? Is it a good thing or a bad thing?
ANSWER :
I remember talking a lot with my wife about the question.
My wife hated receiving a lot of money, and I was okay with receiving a lot of money.
Because they are people who have competed a lot and they have a risk of failure.
As a result, we can watch good games.
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I remember talking a lot with my wife about the question.
>>> I remember talking a lot with my wife about this question.
My wife hated receiving a lot of money, and I was okay with receiving a lot of money.
>>> CORRECT!
Because they are people who have competed a lot and they have a risk of failure.
>>> Because they are the people who have competed in several games a lot and have a risk of failure.
As a result, we can watch good games.
>>> CORRECT!
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