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I think good dream make me feel better.
And I feel good when I sleep well.
Also befor I go to sleep paly exercise.
So I’m tired I fall alseep quickly
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Hello [이름] [이름]!
Sleeping is really necessary to regain energy. Always be grateful before going to bed to have a good night\'s rest. Check your spellings when you are doing your writing homework! ^^
~T. Maine
I think good dream make me feel better.
>>I think a good dream makes me feel better.
And I feel good when I sleep well.
>>Correct.
Also befor I go to sleep paly exercise.
>>Also before I go to sleep, I do some exercises.
So I’m tired I fall alseep quickly
>>So I\'m tired and fall asleep quickly.
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