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What is your thought about the four-day workweek?
It would be great if I have the four-day workweek.
With the three-day off, I can keep my best condition and make use of the days more efficiently.
When the five-day workweek was just introduced, people said that the country will fail. But soon we realized that the day-off is very important for our quality of life and the efficiency of work has been improved so far. As I\'m working, I think the four-day workweek is suitable for the balance between work and life.
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Good day Bo Mi!
I appreciate the effort of doing your homework despite being busy with your work. Keep up and keep practicing in writing and expressing your though, both oral and written.
Have a great day!
Aki~
It would be great if I have the four-day workweek.
>>> Correct!
With the three-day off, I can keep my best condition and make use of the days more efficiently.
With the three-day off, I can keep my best condition and make use of the days more efficiently.
>>> Correct!
When the five-day workweek was just introduced, people said that the country will fail. But soon we realized that the day-off is very important for our quality of life and the efficiency of work has been improved so far.
When the five-day workweek was just introduced, people said that the country will fail. But soon we realized that the day-off is very important for our quality of life and the efficiency of work has been improved so far.
>>> Correct!
As I\'m working, I think the four-day workweek is suitable for the balance between work and life.
>>> Correct!
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