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학생이 쓴 원문
Thank you. my anwser are, I don't lie. but there has been one. when in the first year of middle school, l will buy a book, need money to mamam. still mama don't know this fact.
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday my dear Lisa!
Nice answer. They say that, \"The cruelest lies are often told in silence\". Even though telling the truth always is hard to do, let\'s make the best that we can to keep our conscience clean. Keep up the good work! See you in our class! :)
~T. Lorraine
Thank you.
>> Correct!
my anwser are,
>> My answer is: (Capitalization, Punctuation Mark)
I don\'t lie. but there has been one. when in the first year of middle school,
>> I don\'t lie although there was this instance during my first year in middle school that I lied. (Sentence Construction)
l will buy a book, need money to mamam.
>> I needed to buy a book so I asked money from my mom. (Sentence Construction)
still mama don\'t know this fact.
>> My mom still don\'t know about this fact. (Sentence Construction)
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