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Many people could not be getting old by some reason.
Someone may die from an accident or disease that they could not predict.
강사 첨삭
Great morning [이름]!
Good point on this! One must not afraid of getting older because a new leaf of opportunity is being unfolded each year we celebrate our birthday :)
Thank you for your answer.
Aki~
Many people could not be getting old by some reason.
>>> Correct!
Or >>> Many people do not get the chance of getting old because of some reasons.
Someone may die from an accident or disease that they could not predict.
Someone may die from an accident or disease that they could not predict.
>>> Correct!
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