homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q : What is the biggest problem of families nowadays? Answer in a few sentences.
Nowadays, it is hard to make a deep conversation for family. Sometimes they have to squeeze in the talk.
The best way is having a meal together from face to face.
Yesterday, I had a good rest. I hope my throat get better for tomorrow\'s class.
A pleasant mid week too, Donna! I hope you have a good evening.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] Ju, good evening!
It is true that having a heart to heart talk is very hard to come by lately within our families. But we have to try to be open about our mental health, our goals, dreams, and other aspects of our lives because they are our first supporters and our cheering squad. Therefore, communicating is key to a happier family especially in the presence of hearty meal.
I hope that throat is going to be perfect tomorrow. Continue resting and everything will be fine when I see you.
Have a great evening too!
-T. Donna =)
>> Nowadays, it is hard to make a deep conversation with the family.
The best way is having a meal together from face to face.
Sometimes they have to squeeze in the talk.
>> Correct! Good idiom/ expression!
The best way is having a meal together from face to face.
>> The best way is having a meal together face to face.
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Yesterday, I had a good rest.
Yesterday, I had a good rest.
>> Correct!
I hope my throat get better for tomorrow\'s class.
>> I hope my throat gets better for tomorrow\'s class.
A pleasant mid week too, Donna! I hope you have a good evening.
A pleasant mid week too, Donna! I hope you have a good evening.
>> Correct!
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