HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
ESSAY QUESTIONS:
- What was life like before mobile telephones came along?
- What would your life be like without your mobile telephone?
ANSWER:
Like me, I remember that everyone used PC messenger often because they didn\'t have a cell phone.
Without a cell phone, it would be very difficult in an emergency.
Also, I can\'t imagine going outside without the Internet.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Bob ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next week! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
Like me, I remember that everyone used PC messenger often because they didn\'t have a cell phone.
>> CORRECT!
Without a cell phone, it would be very difficult in an emergency.
>> Without a cell phone, it would be very difficult to communicate when there\'s an emergency.
Also, I can\'t imagine going outside without the Internet.
>> Also, I can\'t imagine going outside without a mobile phone.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.