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2022-03-18 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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Give me one big mistake that you have done and what lesson have you learned from it. I always lay about my mistakes. But I realized that It is better to tell the truth. Lying is making another mistake. So I learned that if I make a mistake, I always have to tell the truth first.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! 

It\'s always necessary for us to tell the truth. Masking a mistake with a lie will never give any good outcome. :) 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon

I always lay about my mistakes. 
>> I always lie about my mistakes. 

But I realized that It is better to tell the truth. 
>> Now, I realize that it  is better to tell the truth. 

Lying is making another mistake. 
>> Lying is another mistake. 

So I learned that if I make a mistake, I always have to tell the truth first.
>> That\'s why I learned that If I make a mistake, I have to always tell the  truth. 

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