Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Harry!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
I didn\'t think of this kind of question because I love something improvising.
>> I didn\'t think of this kind of question because I love improvising.
But I think that I will live in better condition than nowadays.
>> But I think that I will live in better condition than now.
I used to be a thoughtless person and always played games when I was an middle school student.
>> I used to be a thoughtless person and always played games when I was a middle school student.
But I think my life has been changed, and nowadays I always try to live better than the previous day.
>> But I think my life has changed and nowadays, I always try to live better than the previous day.
There must be a lot of failures but I hope I can achieve lots of things like a successful investment, or high salary in the future.
>> There will be a lot of failures but I hope I can achieve lots of things, like have a successful investment or high salary in the future.
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