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ESSAY QUESTION: How does listening to music affect your mood?
ANSWER :
What I know for sure is that in my case,
listening to metal or rock music makes me have a sharp mood and personality and effect to real life.
So i stoped the listening to rock and metal music.
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~ Teacher Tricia
What I know for sure is that in my case, listening to metal or rock music makes me have a sharp mood and personality and effect to real life.
>>> What I know for sure is that in my case, listening to metal or rock music makes me have a sharp mood, personality, and effect on real life.
So i stoped the listening to rock and metal music.
>>> So, I stopped listening to rock and metal music.
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