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2022-03-18 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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I always feel frustrated and dissatisfied in my study. Nowadays, because of my future career, I am always so busy. Frankly speaking, It makes me feel really angry. However, If I imagine my future which is considered as a stupid and lazy life, I can stop being frustrated and starting in my own work. That\'s my solution of enduring from my failures.

강사 첨삭

Hello Harry!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:

I always feel frustrated and dissatisfied in my study.
>> CORRECT!
Nowadays, because of my future career, I am always so busy.
>> CORRECT!
Frankly speaking, It makes me feel really angry.
>> Frankly speaking, it makes me feel really angry.
However, If I imagine my future which is considered as a stupid and lazy life, I can stop being frustrated and starting in my own work.
>> However, if I imagine my future, which is considered as a stupid and lazy life, I can stop being frustrated and start on my own work.
That\'s my solution of enduring from my failures.
>> CORRECT!

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