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If you can learn another language, what would it be and why?
I want to learn Spanish. Because there are a lot of people who speak in Spanish. It is used in various countries. That means if I can do it, I can communicate with people from more countries. So, I can share cultures with people from diverse cultures.
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Hi [이름]!
This is true. Western countries usually study it as their second language. This would be very beneficial if you want to live or work in other countries. :)
I want to learn Spanish. Because there are a lot of people who speak in Spanish.
>> I want to learn Spanish because there are a lot of people who speak with this language.
It is used in various countries.
>> CORRECT
That means if I can do it, I can communicate with people from more countries.
>> CORRECT
So, I can share cultures with people from diverse cultures.
>> With this, I can share different culture with people from different countries.
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