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I want to help Ukraine and maybe most of governments in the world would think as same as me. But before we help Ukraine, we need to think for all human race. If we help Ukraine strongly, that can leads to Russian government\'s rage and aggression. It can make serious problem, like World war 3. Putin is now always mad, so we should keep that up in our minds. So I think our best is just making a big limitation for their economy and supplying a wealth of foods. Sadly, these are the best we can do and we should walk a fine line.
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Good evening Harry. Sorry I worked on this a bit late. ^_^
T. Irene
I want to help Ukraine and maybe most of governments in the world would think as same as me.
>>> I want to help Ukraine and maybe most of the governments in the world are thinking the thing.
But before we help Ukraine, we need to think for all human race.
>>> But before we help Ukraine, we need to think about what is good for the human race.
If we help Ukraine strongly, that can leads to Russian government\'s rage and aggression.
>>> If we help Ukraine all the way, that can fire the Russian government\'s rage and aggression.
It can make serious problem, like World war 3.
>>> It can lead to a serious problem, like World war 3.
Putin is now always mad, so we should keep that up in our minds.
>>> Putin is now always mad, so we should keep that in mind.
So I think our best is just making a big limitation for their economy and supplying a wealth of foods.
>>> So I think the best we can do is just limit or regulate our economic dependence on Russia.
Sadly, these are the best we can do and we should walk a fine line
>>> Sadly, this is the best we can do because we are walking a fine line in there.
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