homework

Hello Harry!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

Even though I visited a lot of countries, I haven\\\'t been to many kinds of cities with my friends. 

>> Even though I visited a lot of countries, I haven\'t been to different cities with my friends. 

But my schooltrip to Jeju island, when I was a middle school student, is a most memorable trip for me. 

>> My school trip to Jeju Island when I was a middle school student is the most memorable trip for me. 

There was a nice person, nice scenery, and nice activity. 

>> CORRECT!

OR

>> There were nice people, sceneries, and activities.

I am 19, so many of my colleagues who went on a trip with are studying for their future universities. And I am always cheer for there future.

>> I am 19 now, so many of my colleagues who I went on a trip with before are studying for their future universities, and I am always cheering for their future.