homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
What should the Korean government do to encourage people to have more children? Share your answer in a few sentences.
It has been a long problem for newly married couple to find a house. Food, clothing, and shelter are the most basic things that people need to live. However, the government has not provided adequate places. fist of all, they should have to solve the real estate issue to encourage people to have more children.
I worried about your allergic symptoms. Have a healthy day too Donna. Thank you
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] Ju!
Housing problem is really one of the toughest problems to deal with specially to couples starting a life together. This may be your problem soon too. So, we hope that president elect Yoon will make policies to solve this pressing problem. Anyway, looking at your sentences below, you made all correct ones. So congratulations to a well done homework!
I am having colds right now but I will be fine when I see you next time. So stay safe and healthy!
Have a great afternoon!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Or: It has been a long problem for a newly married couple to find a house.
I worried about your allergic symptoms. Have a healthy day too Donna. Thank you
Food, clothing, and shelter are the most basic things that people need to live.
>> Correct!
However, the government has not provided adequate places.
>> Correct!
fist of all, they should have to solve the real estate issue to encourage people to have more children.
>> Correct!
Or: First of all, they should have to solve the real estate issue to encourage people to have more children.
I worried about your allergic symptoms. Have a healthy day too Donna. Thank you
>> I\'m worried about your allergic symptoms. Have a healthy day too Donna. Thank you.
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