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When I was young I go to school on weekends in elementary school.
I think elementary school is not boring so its good.
But now I think so bad.
Because I have to rest because I am tired on weekends.
And my mind too tired too.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름]!
I understand your opinion in the question. But to make your ideas clear, try to simplify your answer and remember to always put a subject and a verb in your sentences. Follow the pattern. ^^
~T. Maine
When I was young I go to school on weekends in elementary school.
>>When I was an elementary student, I went to school on weekends.
I think elementary school is not boring so its good.
>>I think the elementary school I went to was not boring. It\'s good for me.
But now I think so bad.
>>But now, I think going to the university is so terrible.
Because I have to rest because I am tired on weekends.
>>I always feel tired so I have to take some rest on weekends.
And my mind too tired too.
>>And my mind is too tired as well.
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