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I think that art can learn in school, but If someone has a more interesting in art, should be learn in academy.
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Good morning, [이름]!
Thank you for your homework I do appreciate your effort of writing your thoughts down. Keep practicing for it will help you develop your skill in expressing yourself.
Take care!
Aki~
I think that art can learn in school, but If someone has a more interesting in art, should be learn in academy.
>>> I think that art can learn in school, but If someone has more interesting in art, should be learned in the academy.
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