homework~~!!
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to my children make a decision of own\'s dreams.
Our children is think of own\'s futher.
Study is very important but I think it is important to decide what they want to do and try.
Our children will go to the Canada for about 3years.
I wish my children could have a bigger dream in a wider world.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ms. [이름]!
Indeed, letting children choose what they would want to become and reaching their dreams and purpose in life is their own task. We as parents just need to support them all the way, this is our task.
Thus, I wish you and your children a wonderful life full of hope and the biggest dreams Canada could offer. I am sure that as their mother, you will continue assisting them reach their dreams.
Thank you for the very good message here on your homework. Study the suggestions carefully.
See you tomorrow!
-T. Donna =)
>> I want my children to make decisions of their own dreams.
Our children is think of own\'s futher.
>> Our children should think of their own future.
Study is very important but I think it is important to decide what they want to do and try.
>> Correct!
Our children will go to the Canada for about 3years.
Our children will go to the Canada for about 3years.
>> Correct!
I wish my children could have a bigger dream in a wider world.
>> Correct!
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