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2022-03-23 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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1. Many young children mistakenly think polar bear likes Coke. 2. I wanted to raise a grizzly bear but my parents were against it. 3. When I was a child, I saw a stuffed animal and was afraid because I mistook it for a real animal.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Ji [이름]!
Thank you for your diligence and for taking time to answer you homework. Please practice keep on practicing for your improvement :)
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T. Aki~
1. Many young children mistakenly think polar bear likes Coke.
>>> Correct!
Or >>> Many young children mistakenly think polar bear likes drinking Coke because of the Ad on TV.
2. I wanted to raise a grizzly bear but my parents were against it.
>>> Correct!
3. When I was a child, I saw a stuffed animal and was afraid because I mistook it for a real animal.
>>> Correct!
Or >>> When I was a child, I saw a stuffed animal and got afraid because I mistook it for a real animal.

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