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Which one is better, studying abroad or studying in South Korea? Explain your answer.
If I can fluently speak in English, Studying abroad is better. Because I can study in not only my major, but also other cultures. I really want to live in other countries for a year at least to experience their cultures. If I get fluent in speaking English, maybe I\'ll go abroad and study in there.
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Hi [이름]!
There are advantages and disadvantages to studying abroad. It usually depends on your main goal. :)
If I can fluently speak in English, Studying abroad is better.
>>If I can fluently speak in English, studying abroad is better.
Because I can study in not only my major, but also other cultures.
>> It is because I can not only study my major, but other cultures as well.
I really want to live in other countries for a year at least to experience their cultures.
>> I really want to live in another country for a year at least to experience their cultures.
If I get fluent in speaking English, maybe I\'ll go abroad and study in there.
>> If I get fluent in speaking English, maybe I\'ll go abroad and study there.
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