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I think when I pride is hurt I most productive.
Because It\'s very bad feel.
That\'s why I work so hard.
And when someone complimennts me I most productive too.
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I think when I pride is hurt I most productive.
>>I think I am most productive when my pride is hurt.
Because It\'s very bad feel.
>>It is because I feel very bad and disappointed about myself.
That\'s why I work so hard.
>>That\'s why I work so hard.
And when someone complimennts me I most productive too.
>>And when someone compliments me, I also make myself more productive.
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