Homework
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HOMEWORK:
ESSAY: What do you think when you hear the words ‘environmental problem’?
-> I insist the environmental problem is not individual.
Many textbooks said \"Don\'t throw trash, don\'t use too much shampoo, and please recycle PET\" So many people know that environmental problem is individual. But, I think the problem\\\'s main owners are enterprises. Because dirty water and exhaust gas made by the factory are so huge than individual\'s things.
Current laws are so weak, therefore, we must check the global environmental law. We can save the environment by reinforcing the laws for future generations.
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T. JenyHOMEWORK:
ESSAY: What do you think when you hear the words ‘environmental problem’?
ESSAY: What do you think when you hear the words ‘environmental problem’?
>>correct
-> I insist the environmental problem is not individual.
-> I insist the environmental problem is not individual.
>> I insist that the environmental problem is not individual.
Many textbooks said \"Don\'t throw trash, don\'t use too much shampoo, and please recycle PET\"
Many textbooks said \"Don\'t throw trash, don\'t use too much shampoo, and please recycle PET\"
>>correct
So many people know that environmental problem is individual.
>>correct
But, I think the problem\\\'s main owners are enterprises.
>>correct
Because dirty water and exhaust gas made by the factory are so huge than individual\'s things.
>>Because dirty water and exhaust gas made by the factories are so huge than individual things.
Current laws are so weak. Therefore, we must check the global environmental law.
Current laws are so weak. Therefore, we must check the global environmental law.
>>correct
We can save the environment by reinforcing the laws for future generations.
>>correct
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