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2022-03-28 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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How should someone who committed a crime for some good cause be punished? Even it was for a good cause, the person who make a crime should be punished. Otherwise that punishment could leave a bad precedent, Maybe that will make people think that If there is a reason we\'re all allowed to commit a crime. Crime is just a crime. There is no good crime.

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Good morning Jane!
Thank you for providing insights about your homework! Great to read your written thoughts.
Stay well ~
Aki~
Even it was for a good cause, the person who make a crime should be punished.
>>> Correct!
Otherwise that punishment could leave a bad precedent.
>>> Correct!
Maybe that will make people think that If there is a reason we\'re all allowed to commit a crime.
>>> Correct!
Crime is just a crime. There is no good crime
>>> Crime is still a crime. There is no good crime

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