HOMEWORK:
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If you are on a vacation and there was an emergency in your company, are you willing to give up your vacation and go back to work instead?
First of all, I have to measure the situation. I need to know how important is the vacation or the tasks means to me.
If there is no one can take place of me to dealing the problem in my company, then i should cancel the vacation. Cause I don\'t want to lose my job. The job makes vacation exist.
강사 첨삭
Hello Jane!
I would agree with you! You have to assess the situation first before deciding. Thank you for sharing your thought. I hope that you won\'t experience such tough situation,
Have a great day :)
Aki~
First of all, I have to measure the situation.
>>> Correct!
I need to know how important is the vacation or the tasks means to me.
>>> Correct!
If there is no one can take place of me to dealing the problem in my company, then i should cancel the vacation.
If there is no one can take place of me to dealing the problem in my company, then i should cancel the vacation.
>>> If there is no one who can take place of me in dealing with the problem in my company, then I should cancel the vacation.
Cause I don\'t want to lose my job. The job makes vacation exist.
>>> Correct!
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