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Hello Faye! Thank you for your complement! I'll continuously work hard learning English, so that I'll express my mind and thought to you. Now I feel so difficult to talk my thought with you exactly. But I will don't be shy, because I'll don't stop study something new. Faye, you support me. I believe in you! This is my homework. 1. Our bank is vying for Busan bank. 2. Time passes in a fast-paced when I work in my office. 3. If we will work sincerely, someday we will win a prize in the competition. It is basic. See you later. Faye.

Hi [이름]! Thank you for making a very good composition. I know you\'re happy because you have discovered something interesting. I hope you can do more composition. Good job! T. Faye   Here are my corrections: Hello Faye!>> Correct.Thank you for your complement! >> Correct.I\'ll continuously work hard learning English, so that I\'ll express my mind and thought to you. >> Correct.Now I feel so difficult to talk my thought with you exactly. >> Now,I have difficulty expressing my thoughts to you exactly. But I will don\'t be shy, because I\'ll don\'t stop study something new. >> But,I willnot be shy, because I\'ll not stop studying new things. Faye, you support me. >> Correct. I believe in you!>> Correct.This is my homework.>> Correct.1. Our bank is vying for Busan bank. >> Correct.2. Time passes in a fast-paced when I work in my office. >> Correct.3. If we will work sincerely, someday we will win a prize in the competition. It is basic.>> Correct.See you later. Faye. >> See you later, Faye.