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John Doe, who graduated from the University of North Carolina two years ago, is now doing graduate work on engineering to Georgia Tech. He expects to receive his Master’s degree in next June. After that, he plans to accept a job like a technician
with an oil company in South America. He is excited for work in one of the biggest companies on the world.
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John Doe, who graduated from the University of North Carolina two years ago, is now doing graduate work on engineering to Georgia Tech.
>>> John Doe, who graduated from the University of North Carolina two years ago, is now doing graduate work on engineering AT Georgia Tech.
He expects to receive his Master’s degree in next June.
>>> He expects to receive his Master’s degree BY next June.
After that, he plans to accept a job like a technician with an oil company in South America.
>>> After that, he plans to accept a job AS a technician with an oil company in South America.
He is excited for work in one of the biggest companies on the world.
>>> He is excited TO work in one of the biggest companies IN the world.
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