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2022-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

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Jim was walking across the campus at noon when he met a friend whom he had not seen during summer. They stopped in front of the gymnasium and sat down on the steps. After they had talked for about ten minutes, Jim said, “I must go to Jefferson Hall this semester. Why don’t you drop by some afternoon after classes?” We can hang-out with each other in a cafe.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Just by doing your homework every day, you are learning so many things already. You are improving your skills in English. Ajha!
T. Irene
Jim was walking across the campus at noon when he met a friend whom he had not seen during summer. 
>>> Correct. 
They stopped in front of the gymnasium and sat down on the steps. 
>>> Correct. 
After they had talked for about ten minutes, Jim said, “I must go to Jefferson Hall this semester. 
>>> Correct. 
Why don’t you drop by some afternoon after classes?” We can hang out with each other in a cafe.
>>> Correct. 

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