Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Have you heard about Robinhood? Tell me your thought about him. Is he a good or a bad person?
I think he is a good person. He is a symbol of the equity and fairness.
On the middle age, lots of people were suffered under the greedy, violent kings and nobles. They have to bear even being stolen their property.
In that time, we can’t define who is a robber and who is a victim.
Fortunately now we can make our own fate. We don’t need a Robinhood anymore.
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Hello there Jane!
I appreciate your diligence these days. You have been working on your homework. Keep going and express your thought through writing! Have fun learning!
Aki~
I think he is a good person. He is a symbol of the equity and fairness.>>> Correct!
On the middle age, lots of people were suffered under the greedy, violent kings and nobles.
On the middle age, lots of people were suffered under the greedy, violent kings and nobles.
>>> During the middle ages, lots of people suffered under the greedy and violent kings and nobles.
>>> During the middle ages, lots of people suffered under the greedy and violent tyrant.
They have to bear even being stolen their property.
>>> They have to bear even their properties are being stolen or taken.
In that time, we can’t define who is a robber and who is a victim.
>>> Correct!
Fortunately now we can make our own fate. We don’t need a Robinhood anymore.
>>> Correct!
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