Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Today my plan is I will go to school.
And before I go to school I will go to the shop.
And after I go to school I will go to the liberary.
Because I have to return the book.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름]!
You can make good sentences. ^^ But check the spelling of the words you write too. Take note of the punctuation marks when doing your homework. Practice more grammar as well. ^^
~T. Maine
Today my plan is I will go to school.
>>Today, my plan is to go to school.
And before I go to school I will go to the shop.
>>And before I go to school, I will go to the shop.
And after I go to school I will go to the liberary.
>>Then after school, I will go to the library.
Because I have to return the book.
>>It is because I have to return the book I borrowed.
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