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2022-03-30 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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If you can listen to one song every day, what would it be and why? I think it is a \'Vacation-Dirty Heads\'. I knew this song recently, but I really like it. When I\'m listening to the song, I get very excited. So it is the first song on my playlist.

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Hi [이름]!

Oh, I have never heard of that song. I\'ll look it up. :)

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I think it is a \'Vacation-Dirty Heads\'.

>> I think it is the \"Dirty Heads\' by Vacation.

I knew this song recently, but I really like it.

>> I knew this song recently and I started to really like it.

When I\'m listening to the song, I get very excited.

>> When I listen to this song, I get very excited.

So it is the first song on my playlist.
>> This is why it is the first song on my playlist.

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