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In my opinion, it seems that the goal is still in progress rather than achieved.
From childhood, my goal was to become an ordinary family and good parents.
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Good day [이름]!
I am impressed with that your thought when you were a child. I know that you will always be a good father to your children because you are agood person :) Take care!
Aki~
In my opinion, it seems that the goal is still in progress rather than achieved.
>>> Correct!
From childhood, my goal was to become an ordinary family and good parents.
From childhood, my goal was to become an ordinary family and good parents.
>>> During my childhood, my goal was to have an ordinary family and become a good father to my children.
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