homework
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HOMEWORK:
Share a photo of your artwork and a few sentences to explain what it means.
I told you in the morning that it\'s a abstraction. The art work\'s name is . I was inspired by John Everett Millais\' work . Ophelia is a tragic heroine in Shakespeare\'s \"Hamlet.\". When I saw the work, I feel indescribable. I expressed in an abstract way that feelings. The height of this is 340cm and the width is 290cm. The material is acrylic, oil pastel on canvas cotton.
Could I one question?
I think they not studied deeply art but I understand them. >> Is it correct sentence?
Thank you Donna! I hope that too. Have a relax and fun with family this weekend!
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Good evening, [이름] Ju!
This art work overwhelms me with feelings just like how you felt towards John Everett Millais\' work. When I first looked at it, I thought it was a happy interpretation because of the hues. But when I read your explanation, it was actually the strong feelings of tragedy. Then, I realized that the shades of colors of your abstract art was accurate to your explanation because it was passionate and to express this needs all the colors that you used.
Nonetheless, I may not be an art expert but I am amazed with the amount of work on this massive canvass.
Anyway, item #10\'s suggestion was already placed on your page. Again, apologies for missing out on that. It is also written here below.
Thank you for sharing this masterpiece of yours, [이름] Ju! It\'s a marvelous one.
Happy, happy weekend to you!
-T. Donna =)
I told you in the morning that it\'s a abstraction.
>> I told you in the morning that it\'s an abstraction.
The art work\'s name is .
>> The art work\'s name is ____________________.
I was inspired by John Everett Millais\' work .
>> Correct!
Ophelia is a tragic heroine in Shakespeare\'s \"Hamlet.\".
>> Correct!
When I saw the work, I feel indescribable.
>> When I saw the work, I felt indescribable.
I expressed in an abstract way that feelings.
>> I expressed it in an abstract way with my feelings.
The height of this is 340cm and the width is 290cm.
>> Correct!
The material is acrylic, oil pastel on canvas cotton.
>> Correct!
Could I one question?
Could I one question?
>> Correct!
I think they not studied deeply art but I understand them. >> Is it correct sentence?
10. I think they not studied deeply art but I understand them.
>>I think they did not study art deeply, but I understand them.
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