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2022-04-03 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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What is the best gift you have ever received and why is it so special? I received a smart watch from my brother last year. Because It was discharged from military service, he game it me and really celebrated me. I was so thankful to him and I still am. It was one of the most memorable gifts in my life.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

You and your brother have a very special bond and it\'s nice. He is very thoughtful as well :)

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I received a smart watch from my brother last year. Because It was discharged from military service, he game it me and really celebrated me.

>> I received a smart watch from my brother last year because he was discharged from military service. He gave it to me and celebrated with me.

I was so thankful to him and I still am.

>> CORRECT

It was one of the most memorable gifts in my life.

>> CORRECT

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