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2022-04-06 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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Are you afraid of getting old? Why or why not? Of course. Because the older I get, the closer I get to death. Also sometimes I miss my childhood. But there is nothing I can do about getting older. So I always try to live my life to the fullest.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Yes, we need to value our time always. We\'re not getting any younger these days so we should enjoy life as much as we can.

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Of course. Because the older I get, the closer I get to death.

>> Of course because the older I get, the closer I get to death.

Also sometimes I miss my childhood.

>> I also sometimes miss my childhood.

But there is nothing I can do about getting older.

>>But there is nothing I can do about getting older So I always try to live my life to the fullest.

So I always try to live my life to the fullest.

>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.

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