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2022-04-04 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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I like meeting new people. But I have a shy personality. So I can\'t approach first. But you approach first, I approach you.

Hi there, [이름] Young!

Thanks for sending your homework. I got to know your shy personality through your composition. Speak to you in class!

Cheers,

Jean~~

I like meeting new people.

>> OR: I enjoy getting to know people I\'ve never met before.

But I have a shy personality.

>> OR: However, I feel awkward around someone I don\'t know.

So I can\'t approach first. But you approach first, I approach you.

>> So I can\'t approach first but if the person approaches me first, I\'d be more comfortable and friendly.

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