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학생이 쓴 원문
What advice would you give someone going to Korea for the first time?
In my case, when I travel a foreign country, I always visit a Market. Cause I can buy some snakes and fruit what local people actually eat, and also I couldn\'t buy in my country.
Home-pluss and e-mart are most famous markets in Korea. If visitors visit those market, they can found a lot of unfamiliar but interesting things. They can also buy some as a gift to their friends.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Jane!
Have you heard that the locals itself promote tourism in their country. How the locals treat tourist make them go back OR not go to that country. I heard that Korea has a lot of things to offer. Hope to see and visit your country someday, If I already have a lot of money. hahaha!
Thank you for your response.
Aki~
In my case, when I travel a foreign country, I always visit a Market.
>>> In my case, when I travel to a foreign country, I always visit a market.
Cause I can buy some snakes and fruit what local people actually eat, and also I couldn\'t buy in my country.
>>> Cause I can buy some snacks and fruit that local people actually eat, and also I couldn\'t buy in my country.
Home-plus and E-mart are most famous markets in Korea.
>>> Home-plus and E-mart are the most famous markets in Korea.
If visitors visit those market, they can found a lot of unfamiliar but interesting things.
>>> If visitors visit those markets, they can find a lot of unfamiliar but interesting things.
They can also buy some as a gift to their friends.
>>> They can also buy some as a gift for their friends.
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