Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
-What is your favorite fairy tale? Why?
In Korea, there is a fairy tale called the rabbit and the turyle.
“Slow and steady wins the race” like this word, it is a fairy tale with good lessons.
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https://youtube.com/channel/UCxLDP0pzmrMbEbdG55Lg1tw
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ju!^^
I already subscribed to your channel!
You had so many views.
I also watched some of your swimming videos.
It looks so easy when you swim.
It is very graceful and relaxing!!!
How I wish I can swim like you.. hahaha
Teacher Andrea
In Korea, there is a fairy tale called the rabbit and the turyle.
>> In Korea, there is a fairy tale called The Rabbit and the Turtle.
“Slow and steady wins the race” like this word, it is a fairy tale with good lessons.
>> \"Slow and steady wins the race\", just like in this world, it is a fable that gives a moral.
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