homework &
학생이 쓴 원문
1) I like the blue T-shirt over there better than the red one.
2) Their car does 150 miles an hour.
3) Where's the USB drive I lent you last week?
4) Do you still live in Bristol?
5) Is your mother working in the old office building?
It's getting warmer.
It seems coming Spring.
But I feel cold still.
Korean's Febrary weather has a cycle of three cold days and four warm days.
We call it Sam-han-sa-on.
And these days' cold is very severe.
Our ancestors thought the cold is jealous of a flowers.
So it's very cold to stop coming Spring.
This is the reason why cold is severe.
Thesedays, many people around me have a cold.
I try to eat a food include vitamin C.
Usally I don't eat a vegetable and a fruit.
I like a meat, I don't like a thing with sweet and sour.
But Vitamin C strengthen our immunity.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Miss. [Name], thank you for making your homework once again, and ofcourse, job well done! :)
Keep up the good work Miss. [Name]..
And you always take care of yourself..
Talk to you later again my dear..
Teacher Cam^^
1) I like the blue T-shirt over there better than the red one.
>>I like the blue shirt better than the red one.2) Their car does 150 miles an hour.
>>correct3) Where\'s the USB drive I lent you last week?
>>correct4) Do you still live in Bristol?
>>correct5) Is your mother working in the old office building?>>correctIt\'s getting warmer.
>>correctIt seems coming Spring.
>>It seems like Spring is just around the corner.I feel cold still.
>>correctKorean\'s Febrary weather has a cycle of three cold days and four warm days.
>>correctWe call it Sam-han-sa-on.
>>correctAnd these days\' cold is very severe.
>>And these days it\'s very cold.Our ancestors thought the cold is jealous of a flowers.
>>correctSo it\'s very cold to stop coming Spring.
>>So it will be very cold til the end of Spring.This is the reason why cold is severe.
>>This is the reason why it\'s very cold nowadays.Thesedays, many people around me have a cold.
>>These days, many people around me have colds.I try to eat a food include vitamin C.
>>I try to eat foods rich in vitamin C.Usally I don\'t eat a vegetable and a fruit.
>>I usually don\'t eat fruits and vegetables.I like a meat, I don\'t like a thing with sweet and sour.
>>I like eating meat. I dont like eating sweet or sour foods.t Vitamin C strengthen our immunity.
>>correct
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