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2012-02-28 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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1) I like the blue T-shirt over there better than the red one. 2) Their car does 150 miles an hour. 3) Where's the USB drive I lent you last week? 4) Do you still live in Bristol? 5) Is your mother working in the old office building? It's getting warmer. It seems coming Spring. But I feel cold still. Korean's Febrary weather has a cycle of three cold days and four warm days. We call it Sam-han-sa-on. And these days' cold is very severe. Our ancestors thought the cold is jealous of a flowers. So it's very cold to stop coming Spring. This is the reason why cold is severe. Thesedays, many people around me have a cold. I try to eat a food include vitamin C. Usally I don't eat a vegetable and a fruit. I like a meat, I don't like a thing with sweet and sour. But Vitamin C strengthen our immunity.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Miss. [Name], thank you for making your homework once again, and ofcourse, job well done! :) Keep up the good work Miss. [Name].. And you always take care of yourself.. Talk to you later again my dear.. Teacher Cam^^ 1) I like the blue T-shirt over there better than the red one. >>I like the blue shirt better than the red one.2) Their car does 150 miles an hour. >>correct3) Where\'s the USB drive I lent you last week? >>correct4) Do you still live in Bristol? >>correct5) Is your mother working in the old office building?>>correctIt\'s getting warmer. >>correctIt seems coming Spring. >>It seems like Spring is just around the corner.I feel cold still. >>correctKorean\'s Febrary weather has a cycle of three cold days and four warm days. >>correctWe call it Sam-han-sa-on. >>correctAnd these days\' cold is very severe. >>And these days it\'s very cold.Our ancestors thought the cold is jealous of a flowers. >>correctSo it\'s very cold to stop coming Spring. >>So it will be very cold til the end of Spring.This is the reason why cold is severe. >>This is the reason why it\'s very cold nowadays.Thesedays, many people around me have a cold. >>These days, many people around me have colds.I try to eat a food include vitamin C. >>I try to eat foods rich in vitamin C.Usally I don\'t eat a vegetable and a fruit. >>I usually don\'t eat fruits and vegetables.I like a meat, I don\'t like a thing with sweet and sour. >>I like eating meat. I dont like eating sweet or sour foods.t Vitamin C strengthen our immunity. >>correct  

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