homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
Do you have any vices like smoking and drinking? Share your answer in a few sentences.
No, I haven\'t those vices. In early 20s, I enjoyed drinking with friends. But now I don\'t enjoy it except for anniversaries.
Thank you Donna! Have a cozy evening.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] Ju!
It\'s a very good thing to know that you do not have any vice. I can remember a lot of drinking in college too like we were so thirsty of alcohol. ^^
Anyway, as we grow older, he have different priorities and preferences of what to do. Perhaps, drinking just gets old and we eventually forget about it. Well, great job in making all of the correct sentences. Also, study the ones that have suggestions.
Have a cozy, easy, and peaceful evening, [이름] Ju.
See you!
-T. Donna =)
No, I haven\'t those vices.
>> Correct!
In early 20s, I enjoyed drinking with friends.
>> When I was in my early 20s, I enjoyed drinking with friends.
But now I don\'t enjoy it except for anniversaries.
>> Correct!
Or: But now, I don\'t enjoy it except for anniversaries.
Thank you Donna! Have a cozy evening.
>> Correct!
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