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I almost agree this opinion. First of all, in capitalism, material possession could be one of the most important metric that can judge how the person do effort. Likewise, social status shows the person\'s effort to get it. However, if there are unfair in progress to get social status or material possessions, it should not be accept.
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Good evening [이름]. Well, thank you for taking the time to work on your homework. I appreciate your opinion on this matter. ^_^
T. Irene
I almost agree this opinion.
>>> I almost agree with/to this opinion.
First of all, in capitalism, material possession could be one of the most important metric that can judge how the person do effort.
>>> First of all, in capitalism, material possession could be one of the most important tools for measuring a person\'s effort.
Likewise, social status shows the person\'s effort to get it.
>>> Likewise, the social status shows the person\'s effort to get it.
However, if there are unfair in progress to get social status or material possessions, it should not be accept.
>>> However, if there are unfair practices on getting the social status or material possessions, it should not be accepted.
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