HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Is it better to go to popular tourist destinations or lesser known tourist destinations?
Why?
I prefer lesser known tourist destinations more than popular.
Because staying in a quiet and comfortable place gives you enough rest.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Bob.
I agree with your answer. It is more relaxing if you go to a place with fewer people. It is peaceful, and you can enjoy the beautiful scenery by yourself.
~T.Erin ^_^
I prefer lesser known tourist destinations more than popular.
>>I prefer lesser known tourist destinations more than popular ones.
Because staying in a quiet and comfortable place gives you enough rest.
>>CORRECT
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