homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
What is your favorite holiday? Answer in a few sentences.
My favorite holiday is Christmas. It is special to me. Because Christmas Eve and my birth day are the same. When December approaches I start to excited.
강사 첨삭
Happy Tuesday, [이름] Ju!
You are so lucky to have been born on Christmas Eve! This way, it is a double celebration.
Holidays are the moments that we spend with the people we love because it is the time when we can all be together. So it is good to make plans to make everyone happy.
Looking at your sentences below, they are simple yet correct, great job! Read carefully the last sentence and take note of the grammar suggestion.
See you in class!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
It is special to me.
>> Correct!
Because Christmas Eve and my birth day are the same.
>> Correct!
Or: It is special to me because Christmas Eve and my birthday are the same.
When December approaches I start to excited.
>> When December approaches, I start to be excited.
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