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2022-04-20 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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When I went to the MT in club when I was in university, there were originally 10 people who were supposed to attend, but not many people came, so 3 men went there. I remember that it rained all day and only drank alcohol at the pension

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When I went to the MT in club when I was in university, there were originally 10 people who were supposed to attend, but not many people came, so 3 men went there.
>>>CORRECT!
I remember that it rained all day and only drank alcohol at the pension.
>>> I remember that it rained all day and we only drank alcohol at the pension.

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